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Checklist for Revising Paragraphs Can a reader understand and follow my ideas? Is the topic sentence clear? Have I fully supported the topic sentence with details and facts? Does the paragraph have unity? Does every sentence relate to the main idea? Does the paragraph have coherence? Does it follow a logical order and guidethe reader from point to point? Have I varied the length and type of my sentences? Is my language exact, concise, and fresh? Have I proofread carefully for grammatical and spelling errors?Checklist for Revising Essays Is the thesis statement clear? Does the body of the essay fully support the thesis statement? Does the essay have unity? Does every paragraph relate to the thesis statement? Does the essay have coherence? Do the paragraphs follow a logical order? Are the topic sentences clear? Does each paragraph provide good details and well-chosen examples? Does the essay conclude, not just leave off?Copyright 2011 Cengage Learning. All Rights Reserved. May not be copied, scanned, or duplicated, in whole or in part. Due to electronic rights, some third party content may be suppressed from the eBook and/or eChapter(s).Editorial review has deemed that any suppressed content does not materially affect the overall learning experience. Cengage Learning reserves the right to remove additional content at any time if subsequent rights restrictions require it.9781111349004 ifc se.indd ii12/16/10 2:32 PM
EvergreenA Guide to Writing with ReadingsCompact 9th EditionCopyright 2011 Cengage Learning. All Rights Reserved. May not be copied, scanned, or duplicated, in whole or in part. Due to electronic rights, some third party content may be suppressed from the eBook and/or eChapter(s).Editorial review has deemed that any suppressed content does not materially affect the overall learning experience. Cengage Learning reserves the right to remove additional content at any time if subsequent rights restrictions require it.49002 00 fm pi-xx.indd i12/16/10 4:06 PM
EvergreenA Guide to Writing with ReadingsCOMPACT NINTH EDITIONSusan FawcettAustralia Brazil Japan Korea Mexico Singapore Spain United Kingdom United StatesCopyright 2011 Cengage Learning. All Rights Reserved. May not be copied, scanned, or duplicated, in whole or in part. Due to electronic rights, some third party content may be suppressed from the eBook and/or eChapter(s).Editorial review has deemed that any suppressed content does not materially affect the overall learning experience. Cengage Learning reserves the right to remove additional content at any time if subsequent rights restrictions require it.49002 00 fm pi-xx.indd iii12/16/10 2:29 PM
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ContentsPREFACE xiACKNOWLEDGMENTSUNIT 11xviiExploring the WritingProcess 3A. The Writing Process 3Exploring Online 4B. Subject, Audience, and PurposeExploring Online 62CHECKLIST The Process of Writing BasicParagraphs 33Exploring Online 3454UNIT 2Freewriting 7Brainstorming 9Clustering 10Asking Questions 11Keeping a Journal 13Exploring Online 16Discovering theParagraph 18UNIT 3535Developing theParagraph 50Illustration51CHECKLIST The Process of Writing anIllustration Paragraph 55Suggested Topic Sentences for IllustrationParagraphs 56Exploring Online 56The Process of WritingParagraphs 19A. Defining and Looking at the Paragraph 19B. Narrowing the Topic and Writingthe Topic Sentence 21C. Generating Ideas for the Body 24Achieving CoherenceA. Coherence Through Order 35Exploring Online 41B. Coherence Through RelatedSentences 42Exploring Online 44Exploring Online 47Exploring Online 48Prewriting to GenerateIdeas 7A.B.C.D.E.3D. Selecting and Dropping Ideas 25E. Arranging Ideas in a Plan or an Outline 26F. Writing and Revising the Paragraph 27Getting Started 26Narration58CHECKLIST The Process of Writinga Narrative Paragraph 60vCopyright 2011 Cengage Learning. All Rights Reserved. May not be copied, scanned, or duplicated, in whole or in part. Due to electronic rights, some third party content may be suppressed from the eBook and/or eChapter(s).Editorial review has deemed that any suppressed content does not materially affect the overall learning experience. Cengage Learning reserves the right to remove additional content at any time if subsequent rights restrictions require it.49002 00 fm pi-xx.indd v12/16/10 3:29 PM
viCONTENTSSuggested Topics for NarrativeParagraphs 61Exploring Online 627Description11Process6312DefinitionCause and Effect13PersuasionA. Single-Sentence Definitions 75B. The Definition Paragraph 7810Comparison and ContrastA. The Contrast Paragraph andthe Comparison Paragraph 83CHECKLIST The Process of Writinga Comparison or ContrastParagraph 88Suggested Topics for Comparisonor Contrast Paragraphs 89B. The Comparison and ContrastParagraph 89Suggested Topics for Comparisonand Contrast Paragraphs 91Exploring Online 91UNIT 483104CHECKLIST The Process of Writinga Persuasive Paragraph 109Suggested Topics for PersuasiveParagraphs 110Exploring Online 11175CHECKLIST The Process of Writinga Definition Paragraph 81Suggested Topics for DefinitionParagraphs 81Exploring Online 8297CHECKLIST The Process of Writinga Cause and Effect Paragraph 101Suggested Topics for Cause and EffectParagraphs 102Exploring Online 10269CHECKLIST The Process of Writinga Process Paragraph 73Suggested Topics for Process Paragraphs 73Exploring Online 74992CHECKLIST The Process of Writinga Classification Paragraph 95Suggested Topics for ClassificationParagraphs 95Exploring Online 96CHECKLIST The Process of Writinga Descriptive Paragraph 66Suggested Topics for DescriptiveParagraphs 67Exploring Online 688Classification14Writing theEssay 112The Process of Writingan Essay 113A.B.C.D.E.Looking at the Essay 113Writing the Thesis Statement 117Generating Ideas for the Body 120Organizing Ideas into an Outline 121Ordering and Linking Paragraphsin the Essay 124F. Writing and Revising Essays 129CHECKLIST The Process of Writingan Essay 136Suggested Topics for Essays 136Exploring Online 137Copyright 2011 Cengage Learning. All Rights Reserved. May not be copied, scanned, or duplicated, in whole or in part. Due to electronic rights, some third party content may be suppressed from the eBook and/or eChapter(s).Editorial review has deemed that any suppressed content does not materially affect the overall learning experience. Cengage Learning reserves the right to remove additional content at any time if subsequent rights restrictions require it.49002 00 fm pi-xx.indd vi12/16/10 2:29 PM
viiCONTENTS15A. The Introduction 138B. The Conclusion 141C. The Title 143Exploring Online 14616Types of Essays, Part 1A.B.C.D.E.1720 Writing Under Pressure:The Essay ExaminationThe Illustration Essay 147The Narrative Essay 150The Descriptive Essay 154The Process Essay 157The Definition Essay 160Exploring Online 163Types of Essays, Part 2Summarizing, Quoting,and Avoiding PlagiarismUNIT 521180A. Avoiding Plagiarism 180B. Writing a Summary 181CHECKLIST The Process of Writinga Summary 18419CHECKLIST The Process of Answeringan Essay Question 210Exploring Online 210164C. Using Direct and Indirect QuotationExploring Online 187205A. Budgeting Your Time 206B. Reading and Understanding the EssayQuestion 207C. Choosing the Correct Paragraph or EssayPattern 207D. Writing the Topic Sentence or the ThesisStatement 209147A. The Comparison and the ContrastEssay 164B. The Classification Essay 168C. The Cause and Effect Essay 171D. The Persuasive Essay 175Exploring Online 17918C. Adding Sources to Your Essay andDocumenting Them Correctly 196Suggested Topics for Research 203Exploring Online 204The Introduction, the Conclusion,and the Title 138185Strengthening an Essaywith Research 188A. Improving an Essay with Research 188B. Finding and Evaluating Outside Sources:Library and Internet 192Improving YourWriting 212Revising for Consistencyand Parallelism 213A. Consistent Tense 213B. Consistent Number and PersonC. Parallelism 217Exploring Online 21821422 Revising for SentenceVariety219A. Mix Long and Short Sentences 220B. Use a Question, a Command, or anExclamation 221C. Vary the Beginnings of Sentences 223D. Vary Methods of Joining Ideas 225E. Avoid Misplaced and ConfusingModifiers 230Copyright 2011 Cengage Learning. All Rights Reserved. May not be copied, scanned, or duplicated, in whole or in part. Due to electronic rights, some third party content may be suppressed from the eBook and/or eChapter(s).Editorial review has deemed that any suppressed content does not materially affect the overall learning experience. Cengage Learning reserves the right to remove additional content at any time if subsequent rights restrictions require it.49002 00 fm pi-xx.indd vii12/16/10 2:29 PM
viiiCONTENTSF. Review and Practice 231Exploring Online 2322327 Avoiding SentenceErrorsRevising for LanguageAwareness 233A. Exact Language: Avoiding Vagueness 233B. Concise Language: AvoidingWordiness 235C. Fresh Language: Avoiding Triteness 236D. Figurative Language: Similes andMetaphors 237Exploring Online 23924 Putting Your Revision Skillsto Work240Exploring Online 244Reviewing theBasics 246UNIT 625 The Simple SentenceSubordinationA.B.C.D.E.252Coordination 252Subordination 253Semicolons 255Conjunctive Adverbs 256Review 257Exploring Online 258A. Avoiding Run-Ons and CommaSplices 259B. Avoiding Fragments 260Exploring Online 26528 Present Tense(Agreement)266A. Defining Subject-Verb Agreement 266B. Three Troublesome Verbs in the PresentTense: To Be, To Have, To Do 268C. Special Singular Constructions 269D. Separation of Subject and Verb 270E. Sentences Beginning with Thereand Here 270F. Agreement in Questions 271G. Agreement in Relative Clauses 271Exploring Online 27229 Past Tense247A. Defining and Spotting Subjects 247B. Spotting Prepositional Phrases 248C. Defining and Spotting Verbs 249Exploring Online 25126 Coordination and259273A. Regular Verbs in the Past Tense 273B. Irregular Verbs in the Past Tense 274C. A Troublesome Verb in the Past Tense:To Be 276D. Troublesome Pairs in the Past Tense:Can/Could, Will/Would 276Exploring Online 27730 The Past Participle278A.B.C.D.E.Past Participles of Regular Verbs 278Past Participles of Irregular Verbs 279Using th
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